Wednesday 9 May 2012

The Apprentice

As part of Year 4's Literacy unit looking at Persuasive Texts, we had to create a pitch to persuade leading supermarkets to buy into our new biscuit range in the style of 'Junior Apprentice'


Could you post some example sentences that you included within your pitch and state what key feature this covered?
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7 comments:

  1. Amandeep9 May 2012 at 20:21

    bye these chunky chocolate chip warm gloopy cookies and my slogan that i would have is chocolate chunky cookies

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  2. Mr Darnley9 May 2012 at 21:28

    *buy
    Brilliant Amandeep!

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  3. emma10 May 2012 at 18:00

    my slogan was yum yum yum in my tum doble chocolate chip cooies and one of my retorical questions was are you hungry?

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  4. Harsimrat Singh10 May 2012 at 18:16

    Want a bite? Why not have a double chocolate chunk cookies.

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  5. Harsimrat Singh10 May 2012 at 18:18

    Have a lookie our chocolate chip cookies

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  6. Amandeep10 May 2012 at 19:23

    Thank you Mr Darnley very nice comment

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  7. Abby15 May 2012 at 12:01

    It was great fun for everyone and i am glad that everyone was happy.

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